Page 5: 4 panels
Panel 1: Wide angle shot of the same military compound.
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Panel 2: Medium shot inside the same bright lab as Bernard helps Danny step out of a large gym bag.
DANNY: Geez! Why did I have to sit in that bag?
BERNARD: Shh. Low voice. No one can ever know you were here.
Panel 3: Angle on Bernard as he slides an access card into a security keypad.
DANNY (Off-Panel): So, where’s the secret?
BERNARD: Behind this door.
SFX: Ka-Chunk
Panel 4: Wide, low angle shot behind Bernard and Danny as the giant doors slide open to reveal a brilliant, gleaming aluminum flying saucer inside a massive hangar.
ELECTRONIC VOICE: Welcome, Dr. Wong.
DANNY: Holy cow…
BERNARD: Neat, huh?
DANNY: Who’s Dr. Wong?
BERNARD: My, uh, codename.
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So, there you have it, folks. Another edition of From Script to Page.
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